Prompt : If you were an animal, what would you be and why?

If I were an animal, house dog. Here are my reasons why I would want to be a house dog: I would get treated well, I would become a loyal friend to my owner, I can make people happy, and I can rest all day long.

I believe that dogs get pampered because if you do a simple trick such as sit or handshake, you can get a treat. Another reason why I believe dogs get treated well is because they only live for a short period of time so the owner usually takes good care of them.

Dogs are said to be the most loyal animals to humans. This strengthens the bond between the dog and the owner. This allows the dog to have a lifelong friend who treats them nicely and is caring. That means that the dog will be loved for his whole life.

A main reason why I would want to be a dog is to make people happy and cheer them up when they are down. I think that the ability to lift people up is very good because you can help people out when they are sad, depressed, or angry. That means that you can help people out with their depression and anxiety.

My final reason why I would want to be a dog is that you can rest all day! You don’t have to think about anything, you don’t have any work to do, and you can play all day long. That means you won’t ever get stressed about turning in a project late.

In conclusion, if I were to be an animal, I would be a dog because I would have the ability to cheer people up, have fun all day, get treated well, and be cared for and loved. This makes life so much more worth living!

Good revision Ian!