New York’s Giant Hot Dog Sculpture Makes A Spectacular Return

A giant hot dog sculpture, was measuring twenty meters long, has returned to Times Square in New York. The giant hot dog sculpture first appeared in the city two years ago as a display. Now, it had has made a tasty (fun use of the adjective tasty!) comeback. This snack has been was (alwys try to use the simple past tense in your writing) installed to celebrate the US’s 250th birthday. The artists, Jen Catron and Paul Outlaw, created this tasty treat sculpture. They sat on a large truck that can be lifted up to 65 feet into the air (Did they do this in order to make the sculpture? Or why did the sit on this truck?).

On The side of the large art work, it is decorated with the colors of the American flag, red, white, and blue. It even has a golden figure of Lady Liberty standing on top of it. It had been was installed in the heart of the city and as a part of the nation’s birthday.

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